I just want some honest feedback on my draft so far, it is still going through the idea phase and is nowhere close to competition. (Be detailed in your response.)

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omggg why is people on here sooo talanted .. rose had alot going on try using more suspense to really grab the readers attention... also throw curve balls so it wouldn't be too predictable... don't be shy to make some people mad ...when you end the story make an unpredictable ending

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I didn't read the whole thing, but maybe say sumthing like "When he opened his eyes he couldn't see anything due to the darkness, he noticed a smell that he could desribe as... (for example) a very unpleasant smell..." , cause you're putting too many "and"'s in one sentence. Just try not to put too many "and"'s in a sentence and make sure you use commas!

what is the moral of king Arthur? ​

they planted rice.(passive negative)​

Hello people, how is your day/night going? I was wanting to know if you guys have seen SpongeBob and have caught any adult humor as I have lol! It is a killer when you do find it!!

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What powers does Congress have to provide oversight over the executive and judicial branches?

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This is a two-part item
Part A
What mainly convinces the narrator to attempt the plan?
A
her fear of being tortured
B
her frustration with life in Charleston
С
her concerns over the well-being of her family
D
her confidence in Robert's ability to navigate the ship
Part B
Which sentence supports the answer from Part A?
"I must confess that when he first revealed to me this plan I was



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What is Obama saying in his Second inaugural address

Timothy walk to school everyday, and he lives four miles away. Which is the best revision of the underlined word? walks walked walking would walk

Which phrase has the most negative connotation ? of satisfactory quality , of tolerable quality , of decent quality ?

In "The Legend of Sleepy Hollow," how does the screenwriter’s choice of setting affect the film and alter the meaning of the original text?

The temperature of ice water is lower than the temperature of dry ice in alcohol. true or false

Can you please check this! Would this be the correct translations for what I want to say?
1. The teacher calls on the students
-Magistra in discipuli vocat.
2. There are many books in the school.
-In ludo multi libri sunt.
3. The teacher teaches the students.
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I realized that this was our own electric light for us to turn on and off as we pleased. I pushed a chair under it and after some instruction from my mother proceeded to create lightning in the room by turning the switch as fast as I could.
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After reading the passage from Barrio Boy, describe how the author uses connotations and figurative language to make his experience come to life.

Complete the following outline based on the information about sheep in Lesson 5. The main ideas are the topics. These have been written for you. Write supporting details to complete the subtopics of the outline.

I. Mother Sheep Have a Homing Instinct.
A.
B.
II. Mother Sheep Will Adopt an Orphaned Lamb.
A.
B.
III. Sheep Are Incapable of Self-Protection.
A.
B.
C.

Pam draws three scalene triangles. In each figure, she measures each angle, as shown.

Which conjecture is reasonable for Pam to make?


In a scalene triangle, none of the angles are congruent.

In a scalene triangle, one of the angles is obtuse.

In a scalene triangle, none of the angles are right angles.

In a scalene triangle, all of the angles are acute.

Evaluate the last line of the novel: "And Carlson said, 'Now what the hell ya suppose is eatin' them two guys?'" How does this quote prove that the title of this book is appropriate?

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I need help revising this! Or check if anything was wrong with it. This is for English class

The narrator locked the door to the room and threw the key down into the front path.(the yellow wallpaper)
True
False

What is a brief summary of land of the dead from the odyssey

Why do we meditate?

Why should we meditate?

Read the excerpt from It's Our World, Too!: Young People Who Are Making a Difference.

At halftime, as homecoming floats circled the field, Allison Gibbons, a member of the student council, entered the press box, stood before the microphone, and asked for everyone's attention. The crowd grew silent as she began to read the letter.

"I was watching the crowd while Allison read it," Andy said. "When she finished, there was silence, and then almost everyone stood up and cheered. All the students stood up. And the football players were all clapping. It was a wonderful feeling to know that we had people behind us."

Why does the crowd grow silent after the speech?

The crowd is angered because they feel attacked.
The crowd is moved by the students’ compassion.
The crowd is puzzled about the students’ letter.
The crowd is saddened because they feel ashamed

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Pentagon ABCDE and pentagon A'B'C'D'E' are shown on the coordinate plane below:

It is about being alone when you are not really alone and about being scared all the time."​

Read the excerpt from Kaydee's personal narrative.

"What are you doing, Kaydee?" Aunt Mary shrieked. "You're going to set the house on fire!"

I couldn't help but roll my eyes. I struck another match. "Aunt Mary, I'm just trying to get the stove started. Calm down. The starter is broken again, and I just have to light the gas." Aunt Mary wrung her hands and paced back and forth in front of the door to the kitchen, up and down the hall, unable to be in the same room with a lit match.

How does the dialogue develop the characters in this paragraph? Select two options.

What is the main idea of this text??

A.The number of large zebra mussels in the Hudson River has gone down in recent years, but scientists predicted that change and are not surprised by it.

B. The number of small zebra mussels in the Hudson River has unexpectedly gone down in recent years, so scientists have decided to change the focus of their studies on the Hudson River.

C. The number of zooplankton in the Hudson River has unexpectedly gone up in recent years, so scientists expect the number of zebra mussels to increase as well.

D. The number of large zebra mussels in the Hudson River has unexpectedly gone down in recent years, but scientists will continue to study the river to understand the invasion’s changing impact​

Where was the Iceman found?

Which questions does a reader need to ask to find a claim? Check all that apply.


What evidence does the author have?

What issue is the argument about?

What reasons are given for the position?

What is the author’s position on the issue?

What does the author want to convince me of?

my parents decided to visit both boracay and palawan because there places are amazing tourist destination. boracay has white beaches and lush tropic scenery. likewise, EXPLANATION: